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Emma buckled up her helmet and jumped up onto her saddle pushed her legs into the sides of her horse Indie and she started to gallop.Emma felt amazing the world was just flying she was scared but loved the rush and thrill of it she could smell the dewy grass and just the great smell of spring time.The morning sun made the grass light up so it looked like a thousand glittering diamonds .Emma could see a white froth beginning to gather on Indie’s neck and her eyes were streaming like she had been crying because she was going so fast,Emma slowed Indie down into a trot so that she could have a quick breather before starting up again once Indie was not puffing so much know Emma squeezed Indie’s sides again and she was off again.Indie galloped round the paddock at top notch speed and Emma seemed like she was never going to get tired of it.Emma could only hear the sound of the birds in the tree’s and the thud-thud of Indie’s hooves on the grass.Emma slowed
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__**The best feeling in the world improved version 1**__ Emma buckled up her helmet and slid her foot into the stirrup iron hauling herself up into the saddle, after checking her girth she gently coaxed her horse into a trot then a canter then finally a flat out gallop. Emma felt amazing the world was just flying past, she was scared but loved the rush and thrill of it all, she could smell the dewy grass and just the great smell of spring time.The morning sun made the grass light up so it looked like a thousand glittering diamonds. Emma could see a white froth beginning to gather on Indie’s neck and her eyes were streaming like she had been crying because she was going so fast, Emma slowed Indie down into a trot so that she could have a quick breather before starting up again once Indie was not puffing so much know Emma squeezed Indie’s sides again and she was off again. Indie galloped round the paddock at top notch speed and Emma seemed like she was never going to get tired of it. Emma could only hear the sound of the birds in the tree’s and the thud-thud of Indie’s hooves on the grass. Emma slowed down to eventually a holt and walked Indie over to the troff she took a big gulp and lifted her head up and shook her main an tail Emma jumped off and started walking back to the stables once she was there she brushed Indie down and fed her some bran mash before stroking her a few times round her eyes and began unbuckling her saddle .When she had finished she took off her helmet and hung it up on her rack.She wandered outside and looked at the pale moon rising in up in to the sky she locked the shed behind her and ran back to the house.

__ Thursday 9th June __

Metaphors tall:He was a tall giant kind:She was the kindest mother ever fast:He was super fast,faster than a cheetah slow:He was slower than a dying snail smart:He was smarter than Einstein fat:She was fatter than a hippo sneaky:She was very sneaky angry:She was angry with the student beautiful:She was so beautiful ugly:He was ugly,uglier than a pig stubborn:He was so very stubborn short:She was very very short thin:He was stick thin silly:He was very silly scared easily:She was scared very easily He is a giant: He is a giant boy. She is an angel :She is an angel in disguise

Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a garbage tin that has just been empty. 2. The candy was like a volcano eruption flowing on my tongue and all over my mouth __.__ 3. His hands were as big as dinner plates and made a terrific sound when crashed together. 4. My little brother sounds like a wild indian who is chanting a war cry. 5. My room is as messy as ﻿a pigsty that had not been cleaned for a while. 6. School is like ﻿a jail prison where we are made to work ﻿. 7. The chair was as hard as a rock with sharp points __.__ 8. Her hair looked like a flower blossoming in the sun. 9. The monster’s breath was like a rotten egg that had been cracked. 10. The water was as cold as a the Arctic but even worse. 11. My lunch tasted like rotten bread. 12. The rabbit was as soft as a feather.

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document **Similes**: are to comparisons of two unlike things using the words AS and LIKE E.G The stars looked like a million little diamonds flashing in the sky. E.G She danced like a leaf floating in the wind E.G She looked as beautiful as a clear crystal.

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document **Metaphors**: are comparisons of two unlike things without using the words AS and Like E.G He was faster than a Cheetah E.G She looked better than a summers night sky E.G He was larger than a hippo